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Please feel better sis! Your DA Family loves you so much!

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Critique by ~pinkandfriends Nov 6, 2012, 6:21:06 AM

Vision: 3 1/2 stars:
i really like the picture and how big/small everything is. Example: the face just blows my mind. not only does it look good but the eyes are the right size, you didn't over do the cheeks, i could go on but we'd be here forever!
Originality: 4 1/2 stars:
i love how different this is and it amazes me so much that now i'm going to check out the person you drew it for, and i don't do that alot. This is also creative because not only does it still amaze me, but you not drawing a back ground left room for the viewers to think like: what is it doing? where is it going? how tall is it compared to a car? things like that.
Technique: 4 1/2 stars:
not much to say because i already kinda explained it, but it brings a focus to it's face which is always good because, hey didn't you spend alot of time on that?
Impact: 5 stars:
over all this completely blew me away and i can't wait for you'r next drawing.
~Pinkandfriends

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~toadettegal-tk Nov 6, 2012 Student Digital Artist

D'aww cute!^^
I hope your friend feels better soon

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